Challenge 3

The shadow world


Once upon a time there was a man type figure as dark as night who wore black robes and a black hood who suddenly had just emerged from a white beam located in an old decaying house that looked like it was as old as time. 


He had white teeth but not a mouth or a face, just a skull with glowing red eyes. 


There was a dark eerie hall that looked like it had never been touched in centuries because of how dusty and dead it looked.


Speaking of night it was midnight where the moon was BLACK wait it was a solar eclipse the Sun was behind the moon’s shadow. 


Behind this so-called man was a humongous scythe that was not rusty nor polished, it was old and I believe that “thing” with a scythe is Death aka The Grim Reaper.


With all his might he struck the ground with his scythe and the houses all fell into different colours like Light and dark as if they were being sorted into the good place and the bad place. To be Continued.

Why Mr Moran had to stay home.

Title: Why Mr Moran had to stay home.


Mr Moran was ill because he had done something horribly wrong, well actually, something very, very wrong.


Mr Moran was having an ordinary day, except today he did something different. He went to McDonalds and had a Big Mac for breakfast and it was delicious. Then he decided that he should go to a fancy restaurant for dinner. He also said to himself ‘Im going to get a blue Ajax spray to clean my house. He bought the Ajax and light bulb, cleaned the house and got ready to go out for dinner. 


He then thought “I should have dinner with my family and communicate” so he did that but then his stomach felt sore like he wanted to throw up, so he postponed his plans and stayed home in bed sick.

Why Glen Innes is the best community in

Words that I didn’t explain were important.


St pierres   




Pt England School

  • Supportive 
  • Kind 
  • Helpful 


Matariki Festival 

  • Fireworks 
  • Honorable
  • Supportive  


Mad Butcher 

  • Provides food
  • Kind of cheap
  • Spreaded throughout NZ.


We were a signed to write a brainstorm on “Why G.I is the best community in NZ?” and after you wrote down a few words you would pick 3 words and tell them why so picked it in three words.

Writing Challenge

4 years ago Mr Goodwin, a Pt England teacher had won a trip to Samoa because he had won a race, yes a race in running. 


He was Exuberant and had always wanted to go to Samoa. 


He was so excited that he said “I am so happy that I’m going to do something I have never done before and post it on Tiktok”. 

Yes he posted the ticket to Samoa on Tiktok which was strange but nobody minded but little did he know something bad was going to happen on his trip. 


Now fast forward from all the packing Also, did I tell you he was in a sour mood No? well he was in a very sour mood because there was one problem: he had lost his ticket out of all the things to happen he had to lose that ticket what a waste of time. 


He sat there and sighed as he moaned about losing the ticket he reached for his pocket to find his phone yet instead the ticket was there and his phone in the other pocket. 


Bursting for joy he happily went on his way to Samoa and lived happily ever… wait no he had experienced a big humongous earthquake he also posted that on tiktok wow The End. 



My Dream House

Your Dream Home

T TitleWhat you will be explaining
I IntroductionTell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I Information – Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C Conclusion – Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.


Most people can imagine a dream home. What would yours be? Big or small? In the country or in the city? How many floors? Would it be underground or up in a tree? As a young person, write an essay describing your dream home to a parent or guardian.


Today I will be talking about my dream house which I haven’t thought about in years because well i’ve been busy with school work. Also covid has been like Loki, very mischievous and annoying so annoying it made us work from home. 


This topic was given to us so we could explain what our dream house would be with writing and imagination & how far it would go meaning the imagination. Now let us begin the writing. 


So my dream house is a big 3 story house but one of the levels are underground or should I say under the mountain range. Yes I said it was a mountain range now, which mountain range I don’t know just somewhere hidden, not too hidden though so that would be in the country maybe next to the ocean to go fishing. The people that are in my house would be My Mum, Dad, Sister and I but that’s all. 


Now this was my take on a dream house in a mountain range far from everything just not too far from the city so I can get to Pak’nSave and get supplies. Otherwise we would not survive hehe that’s bad. Now to explain the decor of the house, it would be an old house not this modern Minecraft houses and if you don’t understand I mean square houses they give me bad vibes. The underground part would be a base of operation or lab. The house would also have 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms (for each bedroom), 1 lounge, two kitchens and a spare room, maybe for streaming, YouTube videos and gaming. The outside has a balcony, nothing else maybe two plants but that’s all. Now according to me that would be in the trillions including having to own the mountain range plus the workers. Sorry to spoil the fun with money numbers but that’s all folks good day, good evening and Good night. 

This is my second blog post and it is about my dream house. This is not apart of the writing this entire sentence there is just a compliment about my writing which was fun to write.